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First suggestion I will make is to say to NOT rely on the spell checker. There are correctly spelled words incorrectly used throughout the first edition. For example, 'site' should be used instead of 'sight' and vice versa. I think I pointed out q...
D1.55.345 near the bottom: "to cover Vitor, who was sitting where Vholm was standing," You really need to specify if Vholm is now a zombie or what. :D This reads as if he got shot in the head and chest, then after he fell inert to the ground, got ...
D1.54.340 "...wore a cramk electric lantern on his chest." Is there a particular reason for the lantern being mounted there? I'm somewhat aware of what's coming after our discussions, but this seems an awkward configuration. I'd have thought it to...
That works, and also plays into Mholb's demeanor. Nice!
Ok, in Chapter 52 you reference "an elderly black man". At first that seemed odd, simply because it seems hard to imagine a black man surviving in that society. Later on you reference a blue tint to his blackness, so I'm thinking that it might be ...
Yeah, that became evident later on. It is, after all, the safest place for her now.
Ch 47, several times previously you have made a point of women not being allowed in the military. Now you say "dressed in clothing appropriate for a Votain military woman. The explanation immediately after helps, but you might want to double-check...
Ch 46...Right after Korre got word of Zerdy's escape you have " -- find Sxeredy before she made it back to Krechna." How would he know she was heading to Krechna? After all, the Vurhne have many escape routes and all he knows is that they helped h...
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Nice, Ken!
Well, if posting counts, I guess this makes me #3. Guess that means I'll have to try really harder? ;-)
This is going to be interesting, it'll be fun to be in on the start and see how this grows.
This is going to be interesting, it'll be fun to be in on the start and see how this grows.
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As I mentioned in previous posts, this blog is moving to a new domain. That new domain is now up and running. You can get there from here. The new site is on a different server and has my name – ken-mcconnell. This is an attempt to capitalize on future brand awareness. All of the posts [...]Boise Weekly Quote
I was quoted in a local paper today. “The people that work [at Rediscovered] really know books very well. They’re not afraid to talk up the local authors,” says McConnell. “That helps me as a writer who lives here, and it can only help the community to get to know those writers that do live here.” Cool. [...]Baker’s Dozen
I’ll be appearing at Rediscovered Bookshop this coming Saturday, the 21st of November with 12 other Idaho writers in Baker’s Dozen. The event got a nice write-up in the local paper here. I spoke with a reporter from the Boise Weekly, on Friday, so I expect a similar that article this week, also on Baker’s [...]© 2009 Created by Ken McConnell on Ning. Create a Ning Network!
